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Monday, April 14, 2008

Vodka GAl

Greetings All, its been a long time, where had you been?

Hey, man, its been a while
Do you remember me?
When I hit the streets I was 17
A little wild, a little green
Ive been up and down and in between
After all these years
Can you believe Im still chasing that dream
But I aint looking over my shoulder

O.K. this will be my anthem till I'm 50.
So Where have I been? Writing a poem... Ha!! I can proudly say I'm a poet! Woohoo.
Who cares if there's a little bit of help involved.. um my contribution to this poem is not much.. but when you come to think of it, THAT made the difference of making a good poem into a KICK ASS poem, so much that after reading my version, the original author agreed to give me full royalties in case I(we) get the Pulitzer Prize! Well my hero Bob Dylan's got one this time.. so He'll be just as glad when I get it next year..
This works best if you're single,drunk and mad at all the ugly dudes who get the Beautiful Ladies.


VODKA GAL



I was sitting in a bar
She got out of car
I ordered for a beer
She took a seat near

That’s my gal, Blue Jeans -White T-shirt
That’s my gal, With a B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L heart

He was having full whiskey
I thought beer not so risky
He-Man sitting all alone
If he hits I am gone

Dude!!! Who cares?
Stud!!! Who dares?

She was looking like an angel
I was desperate, trying to mingle
Thunderbolt!!! I knew she was mine
‘Waiting for someone, probably have wine’

That’s my gal, look at the way she smiles
That’s my gal, look at her gleaming eyes

She took out Wills
‘Don’t do baby, it kills’
“One Vodka neat John”
Looks like my dreams gone

Vodka gal, I’ll make her drink wine
Vodka gal, still she can be mine

He took his glass and sat close to my gal
He said something and gifted a pearl
She finished her vodka and he finished his whiskey
He took her by arms and left in a taxi

Not my gal, she is a Vodka gal!!!
Not my gal, she is a Vodka gal!!!

Some other day baby some other time
You’ll turn around and notice you were meant to be mine


Applause



Co-authored by Hari K. You can check out his blogs here
http://myfrndz4ever.blogspot.com/

5 comments:

amey said...

hmm.. feeling sad :(.. but really nice

amey said...
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Nautanki sssaala said...

"He was having full whiskey
I thought beer not so risky"


LOL man! where did you come up with stuff like this? chalo atleast rhyme to kar raha hai ... cheers mate!

Philena said...

Good for people to know.

DPhatsez said...

cheers moose!